怎么改英语作文
一、英语作文的等级
四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分
三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分
二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分
一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分
二、英语作文修改案例
案例一：
A Trip to the Zoo
原稿：
Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s my trip.
修改后：
It was a sunny Sunday After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!
As soon as I got there, I was attracted at once. Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.
Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.
案例二：
My favourite season
原稿：
There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.
修改后
My favourite season
As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.
Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach … How comfortable ! More importantly I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .
In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .
三、英语作文修改的注意事项
1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.
2、语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.
3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.